Things I saw being out and about today.
Author: Don
Tweets for Today
- 08:14 Oooh, today’s gonna hurt! I say: Bring it! #
- 08:17 Writing playlist: Chicago’s catalog, set to random. #
- 08:17 …which means I could potentially hear the same songs 5 times over. #
- 09:14 Bad news: net addition of 50 words of prose to WIP. Good news: After 200 wds of notes, I know *EXACTLY* what this story’s going to be about! #
- 09:29 Distracted from story plotting by the sight of kids playing soccer in the snow-covered quad at 9:30 in the morning. #
- 10:52 Like I’ve got the $ to spend, and no studying or writing to do: www.comicbookclub.org/Ithacon.html #
- 11:49 Gearing up for my skool/lunch/speed-walking time. #
- 13:29 Food scarfed down. Got 10, maybe 15 minutes before the power-walk back to work. Who needs muay Thai workouts when I’ve got this routine? #
- 14:26 @noells Funny how their worst albums (and I’m saying this as a *huge* fan) make the best background working music :). #
- 15:25 Of course when I’m at my busiest between writing projects, work, & school, I get pages and pages of random ideas for my notebook. #
- 16:06 @noells In decreasing order of craptitude: XIV, 13, Twenty-1, Hot Streets, and all 60 of their greatest hits compilations after Chicago XX. #
- 16:33 The idea of getting so mindnumbingly plastered into temporary amnesia just seems so, so appealing. #
- 16:35 Ironically, that would require energy I just don’t have. #
- 17:49 @noells Some of my favorite Champlin songs are on Twenty-1! #
- 17:52 Right now, on office CD player: Menahan Street Band to chill me out. Last hour was hell. 45 min left–plenty of time for more! #
- 19:01 Writing at a pub, beer in hand. I’m sure it’ll all be junked as soon as I sober up. Pics to follow (maybe) :). #
- 19:04 @noells I forgot to put Chicago VIII at the tail end of that list. Not *that* crappy, but it’s not exactly CTA, either :). #
- 21:19 I know I was drunk, but listening to an accordion player playing King Crimson…did they spike the beer with LSD?? #
- 21:20 Still feeling comfortably numb… #
- 21:27 Now I’ve seen it all…Krav Maga and Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu moves on STAR WARS: THE CLONE WARS. #
- 21:33 Now we’re breaking out the Jameson’s. As if GHOST ADVENTURES isn’t funny enough. #
- 21:59 @warrenellis Hello again. Prolly don’t remember, but I used to hang out on the Engine way back when. Big DESOLATION JONES fan. #
- 22:30 I… I think I’m actually starting to get into BSG 🙂 #
- 22:47 RT @mightymur I just got a hardon for Roslin. [Amen to that!] #
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Tweets for Today
- 08:45 How is it that prose that seems plain uses writing techniques that really are fucking amazing? tinyurl.com/bowrg6 #
- 10:43 Ah, how fast problem sets can go wrong when you forget one square-root sign *headdesk* *headdesk* #
- 11:08 Today, though–writing at lunch, dammit! #
- 12:23 Did I say writing at lunch? Maybe I should be sleeping. Nah. #
- 12:30 Who’d have thought my process was similar to Nancy Kress’ (even if my writing’s light-years behind)? tinyurl.com/b65yfe #
- 14:20 Lunchtime writing progress was (drum roll, please)…40 words. Four, zero. 🙁 #
- 16:38 Give me strength…! #
- 17:06 Sole control of office CD player again. Right now: Steely Dan! #
- 19:06 Couple of friends were dismayed to learn this song happens to be their ringtone on my cell. It’s nothing person… ♫ blip.fm/~20jcl #
- 19:15 Procrastinating from finishing tomorrow’s problem set for skool. Book’s open, pen’s in hand, and…um…yeah. #
- 19:46 Studying playlist: mix by The Bad Plus #
- 21:19 I…I…what the…346 unread Google Reader items???? #
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Tweets for Today
- 08:13 Resolved, to be better about focusing on skoolwork on skool days, even though I’d rather work on yesterday’s writing :(. #
- 08:14 Skoolwork playlist: pre-SPORTS Huey Lewis & the News. #
- 10:30 Don’t wanna go to the useless work meeting :(. Already know the space is too small to inconspicuously net.surf on the netbook :(. #
- 10:56 Will be bringing my Feb. novel selection to the meeting, Octavia Butler’s WILD SEED tinyurl.com/dg5o55 #
- 11:22 Ooh, I *can* netsurf from the meeting! Shhh. #
- 12:15 Today’s agenda, it seems: "Run around & sit. Repeat." Time for some o’ that fancy book-learnin’. #
- 14:22 Please God, can I just sit for awhile? "Chicken w/my head cut off" is a massive fucking understatement." #
- 16:19 Ozzy’s "Crazy Train" is on the radio at work. How very apropos. #
- 17:30 Office CD player to myself. Nice relaxing El Michels Affair music on. Trying to stay in my happy place. #
- 18:20 Not sure how I’m gonna study or write in the condition I’m in right now. #
- 20:24 Two after-work accomplishments: "jack" and "crap." #
- 22:21 Can’t study while LIFE ON MARS is on. It’s gonna be another late nite. #
- 22:34 RT @mightymur I tweet, therefore people either misunderstand or look for deep meaning in my 140 characters. #
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Tweets for Today
- 07:18 Um…some tweets disappeared, including my writing progress from last night (200 wds)!! WTF? #
- 08:15 Writing motivation at near-zero this morning. I’d really rather just screw off, but I’ve got the file open, trying to be a good boy 🙂 #
- 08:17 Writing playlist: a Robert Lamm mix #
- 09:14 200+ more words this AM. I’ve already reached the "marking time" point of the 1st draft. Time to stop rambling and make something happen!! #
- 09:21 Holy crap–I think I just brainstormed a title! Titles are usually the last things I come up with. #
- 09:33 +150 words of notes. I really need to stop and take a break before work. Funny what you can get done w/7 hrs. of sleep 🙂 #
- 11:29 Can’t believe how many people are cracking up on the *3rd week of classes*!!! #
- 12:49 Thinking of just reading for lunch today. Better yet, how ’bout just eating lunch and relaxing for once? Naaahh. #
- 13:36 Not writing or studying right now. So this is what it used to feel like… 🙂 #
- 15:56 I’m so tired, I think I might possibly be dead in my office chair & it’s just the last bits of electical energy in my brain letting me type. #
- 17:39 test–they say betwittered works again…? #
- 17:39 Woohoo! #
- 19:32 Car is repaired. Have a maxed-out credit card and a redundant key to show for it :(. #
- 19:55 I was gonna focus on skoolwork, honest. But I got some story crits emailed to me…can’t…resist! #
- 22:30 DOCTOR WHO namecheck on LEVERAGE again!! #
- 22:45 @GailSimone I have a dream, True Believers! #
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Tweets for Today
- 08:18 Let myself sleep in just a little bit. At the backup AM writing location processing yesterday’s crit group (kind) evisceration. #
- 08:19 Writing playlist: The Blue Nile, Beckley-Lamm-Wilson, Steve Winwood #
- 08:36 Stopping to record in my notebook the way this chick strutted into the bagel shop in what’re obviously her daughter’s clothes. #
- 08:47 Summary of my bi-weekly evisceration posted: tinyurl.com/d2kods #
- 11:47 Getting ready for the long trudge to skool. Uphill. In the snow. Both ways. #
- 13:27 Came up with my next story hook in class; totally non-class related. And I wonder why I’m behind. #
- 13:32 Wondering if the benefit gained by restarting MMA workouts outweighs potential 14-hour days? Plus, can I keep up with the youngins? #
- 13:34 @LaterOn1969 I used to live near CSU, so I feel you! #
- 13:41 People ask me how I’ve been. This video sums it up (except for the end of it) 😉 tinyurl.com/bb5yv9 #
- 13:43 Um, wait…I guess the lyrics really don’t apply. The title does, tho! Plus, who can’t smile when Huey sings? #
- 14:34 @LaterOn1969 Upstate NY, in a town that sees as much, if not more, snow than C-town sees 🙁 #
- 16:48 Work’s making my head spin faster and Linda Blair’s in THE EXORCIST. Welcome to Monday, I guess! #
- 17:12 Yeah, if I’m this tired tomorrow, muay Thai isn’t happening *again*. I’ll have to write or something… #
- 17:36 Sooo tempted to leave early. No one would know…but I can’t :(. #
- 17:40 @LaterOn1969 Near the Finger Lakes 🙂 #
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Tough Love
So, some of my 2009 writing goals are off to a really fucking bad start. Life and death sometimes get in the way of writing, which is fine. But the good news is, I’ve thus far managed to keep my goal of writing one story a month, even though part of me thinks a 1,400-word story feels like cheating somehow, compared to last month’s 3,000 words. Then again, February is shorter.
Anyway, I finished and polished the bulk of this short-short story the night before yesterday’s critique group while watching the director’s cut of THE GOOD, THE BAD, AND THE UGLY on AMC at 2:00 AM. Hence, the many problems spotted by the eagle-eyed writers in my biweekly crucifixion session.
The Good
- The “switch” i.e. the change of direction at the end of the story
- The rhythm of the writing in some spots
- One pop-culture reference spotted
- The main character’s arc
The Bad
- My second paragraph should’ve been my intro paragraph.
- The fantasy element, telepathy, needed a bit more definition/consistency for one person
- One paragraph on an ex-girlfriend mentioned only once (among other things) could be nixed.
- I never named the story’s supporting character.
- My experiment with not using quotation marks for dialogue was a fail for one reader.
The Ugly
- A major plot point about what people think of the main character might’ve been a little negative when usually, the truth is that most people don’t think about us nearly as much as we think they do.
- …leading to the question of whether the main character is actually reading minds or seeing a reflection of his own POV.
- Another lively debate (like in the last group), this time about my use of the generic THE OFFICE/OFFICE SPACE/DILBERT cubicle-hell setting and how the protagonist’s co-workers were all painted as mean and blackhearted in some cases. One person strongly felt it was “overused” while another felt it was “awesome.”
I can definitely see both sides of that last point. The good news is that I think it’s all fixable.
January Scorecard
Don’t ask. Just don’t.
Tweets for Today
- 09:13 Oooh, why did I have to stay up ’til 3:00 watching THE GOOD, THE BAD, AND THE UGLY? But at least I got my latest story done while doing it!! #
- 09:15 Of course, I shudder to read it. Who knows what kind of jibberish I ended up writing? I probably wrote a scene with a 3-way standoff in it. #
- 10:58 Story’s as good as it’s gonna get for crit group. I’m gonna take the only break I’ll get today. After group: a metric crapload of skoolwork! #
- 17:40 Got a fresh cup of coffee after crit group; prolly not gonna put off the inevitable caffeine crash for long. Gotta get some skoolwork done! #
- 17:47 …and then I’ll be able to consider myself back in the frakkin’ saddle! #
- 18:45 One day’s worth of notes processed. Will see if I can do another set after dinner, or if I’ll fall unconscious. #
- 20:20 I’m a little bit more caught up with skoolwork–panic has subsided (for now). #
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Tweets for Today
- 08:16 Gonna take Blood, Sweat and Tears to get my stuff done today. The band, I mean. And caffeine. Lots of caffeine. ♫ blip.fm/~1wk6g #
- 08:26 Recently abandoned but still interesting: Words I Learned From Reading David Foster Wallace dfwwords.wordpress.com/ #
- 09:17 Wrote another paragraph but every time I looked away, I saw my skoolwork. It’s calling to me. #
- 10:37 Don’t feel good about the current WIP. Feels like I’m writing like an Etgar Keret wannabe. #
- 10:52 Got coffee and a table near an outlet. Need writing music: El Michels Affair, Air, Huey Lewis & the News #
- 11:45 twitpic.com/19n5l – Not sure where to go with this at this point. #
- 15:26 Gonna tackle the wreck that is the home office, desperate to procrastinate from the current WIP. Or as some might call it: "taking a break." #
- 16:01 Frak! Of all the times to be without a car!! JCVD (the film, not the person) is finally in town! www.imdb.com/title/tt1130988/ #
- 16:42 twitpic.com/19t59 – Biggest accomplishment in the home office: getting these books off the floor. #
- 18:30 Evening writing playlist: Chick Corea, Jacky Terrasson, Eliane Elias #
- 18:45 One of the reasons I still bother with a LiveJournal account: tinyurl.com/cvs5f #
- 22:38 Am >this close< to wrapping up Draft 1.0 of the latest WIP! #
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